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Isca 2009-05-21 . chapter 1
I love that you mix light imagery (battlefield fluorescents) with dark imagery (curtains) and apply this to 'the cockeyed fellow from the first floor,' 'the modern arrangement' of the speaker's room, and most importantly, 'infidelity'--all the while, making sure to remind the reader of the Judaic institution, Yeshiva.
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