Great Story!!

OMG U TOOK SO LONG TO UPDATE! :( short chapters. but thank you nonetheless. update son! xoxo and a butterfly_kiss

more fighting? =( man why can't they just be ebony and ivory and get over all of this lol Terry's hatred of Tomiko is really strange. its like he's still harbouring this hatred of her for what she did to Michelle without even realizing it. haha the kiss on the cheek was really cute i smiled when i thought about two three year olds XD please update soon

tomiko is annoying, but i'm so glad tery is beginning to fell in love whith michelle even if is fitghing it. It's so strange that she's going out whith an old man

Uhh...I don't know what's going to happen but I do wonder!! They're quite intriguing! SO! Until the next updatee

I like that he's old. It kind of suits Michelle, i think. Well, not suit, but maybe make more sense, at the least.

I like how they can cooperate with each other better. So many things are changing yet nothing is progressing. It sucks. Ahh.

Sorry for the crappy/short review.

It's so late.

Update so, Soon.

Starving for more... I think Michelle is lonely and looking for what's missing in her life and I don't think its wrong for her to date, but not a DADDY WARBUCKS! But not having a dad in her life for so long I can see how an older man would be what she needs right now... Doesn't mean I have to like it ... lol. Anyway Terry now knows why she left and gets what she's been going through. I want him to be jealous and her too maybe he should date and maybe they'll see they still have feeling for each other and fight for what they both use to have with one another... Love them sleeping in the same bed with their son in the middle that was so sweet:)

Don't leave me hangin to long update soon... I love it love it love it

terry is quilty feeling

Wow! I just finished all of your stories about Michelle and Terry, And OMG if you don't hurry and end this I think I'll go insane this is such a good story I would have bought and paid whatever to have this on my keeper shelf of the best stories ever... I'm such a sucker for romance and happy endings.
I so hope they end up together they have been through soo much I'm stressed out I'm so mad at both of them you really know how to pull someone into a story keep up the good work!!

Oh and p.s. I love the love scenes between them its so sweet would love to have more of that in your story:)

NO! SNIFFLES! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! i feel so bad for terry... its not fair. at all. :( sniff...SOS!

There were a lot of errors in this chapter, just so you know. Were you writing this late?

I'd rather have someone hate me than feel nothing. Hate means they actually care, and that not everything you've been through is for nothing. Even if the end result sucks.

And why the hell is Michelle going out with another guy? Why? She should still be love with freakin Terry. And i know she is -of course she is- but it makes me mad. And sad. I thought the binding was stronger than that, but I guess this is what happens when you're pushed over the edge?

And then Terry being mean, makes me slightly angry as well. Slightly. But i still understand why he was still angry with Michelle even after he knew why she left. And I still don't really get it. Why did she think hiding the child would ultimately be the better solution? Seriously, I don't get her. But, i guess, from her perspective, it's justified.

And i think it's safe to say i never really took a liking to Angela throughout the entire story. Way too outspoken for me. But in the last chapter it was nice to have her. Refreshing, and the outspokenness was needed.

Are you ever going to bring up Michelle's journal again? Because it kinda played a big thing back in "It Rains In July." Or maybe you want to keep out of the story because of it being one of those teenage none-important things. I was just wondering if you were ever going to even bring it up -in passing, of course- again.

Okay, sorry I didn't review last chapter. Extremely busy, and the thought just clouded over in my mind. Sorry.

Update so, Soon.

o no i don't her to have a date zeven if terry deserve it, she should see that no matter what he said terry still love her,.I already hate the guy she's going to date.please don't make me wait too long

o hahahha :D well i hope things look up for the two of them... post more soon

ah the plot thickens, interesting, so interesting.

so Terry finally realizes what an ** he was being lol its about time

I LOVE IT! haha so incredably good... one thing... it gets rele confusing about whose POV it is and whose talking about who sometimes. but its all good! thts the only thing... love your writing super much! please update! (p.s. i love david