This was wonderful. It all flowed very nice and was short and simple. Great job!

I like your rhymes. They sounded really natural and they flowed with the words well. :)

And your imagery for freedom was written nicely. I liked how you used the comparison of wings and flying away. I had a vivid mental image and the idea made me smile. :D

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

this is really short and simple, but i REALLY like it! great job!

Very good.