Very cute chapter name. Is this girl huge, or is this guy insanely small? If you're writing a delicate female, I hope you come up with a reason why she can lift this guy. I can summon all the strength I want but there's no way I can lift more than 50 pounds, you know?

Write more!

it was interesting, I'm very curious as to what it'll turn out to be. you only have minor mistakes such as using "bare' instead of "bear" in the beginning.