; - ; How sad, then sweet. I wanted to kick the boy and then I wanted to hug the girl for finding love. The story line was great. I loved it's simplicity and it's sweetness. I have nothing to complain about. To comment on your English, it's fine. You needn't be self-conscious about it. You probably have been English skills than many people on this website. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

aww:)
that was awesome! i was hoping for more xD
and your doing just fine in engish..keep it up:]

Interesting idea, I liked the turn-around in the end.

Grammar was not so bad so have more confidence!

- Yuki

You really improve well~~
Wahh~ I think I will not be able to catch up with your improvement
in English

The story or plot is great too!
You've done a very good job! *thumbs up *

heay that was pretty good
as for your english it is also very good