I love reading poems about people. People are so... simple sometimes and we really don't need a reason other than we feel like it. So I loved the way you portrayed that in this. It's very true, very realistic.

This would look so nice in single-spaces. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.) It would tie in the thoughts and look much better. And maybe this coul be in all lower cases? It's just a thought, but try playing around format. Format's very helpful in making sure your phrases are distinct and emphasizing things, so I'd like to see this in a more creative form. :)

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

Nice work. I liked how you kept repeating the line 'just because' it helped in emphasizing your point. :)