As always, your poems are full of such beautiful imagery that spins a delicate picture in one's mind. The alliteration is definitely a highlight in this one.

I really like this. It's so short, but so beautiful. You use alliteration really well. I also love your word choices, especially "phosphorescent" that was such a creative choice. Teeming was really nice as well.

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