I have to say that I'm glad I knew Smith & Wesson was a line of firearms. Otherwise, I'd have been confused from the get go.

You have a knack to write in a lot of detail, but that's not a bad thing. I really like this one, especially *because* it didn't rely completely on dialouge and thought process.

The random outbursts made it not only made it personal, but entertaining. ("ESP is a two way bridge, you bastard" happens to be my favorite).

All in all, you've done it again. I particularly like this piece.