| Reviews for Telling the Truth Part 1 |
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Alanisaur 5/19/12 . chapter 1I really hate how you break it there. But beautifully written :) |
absinthe21 9/25/11 . chapter 1 I read part 2 first. So... Yeah. I cried with this one. Amazing. |
Arkenstone 5/26/09 . chapter 1This was short and sweet. I like the way you portrayed his guilt and apprehension at meeting his wife. I think a lot of people have felt something similar at one point in their lives! You didn't include unnecessary details which I thought was great. A lot of short stories get side-tracked by small details. Anyway, keep writing! :) |