So far, very good. You made sure that the opening paragraphs were intriguing enough to read on and now I am fully hooked. I look forward to learning more about this main character and the people he encounters.

However, only one thing that really stood out of place was the main character's last piece of dialogue at the end. It seemed like he just had no problem about what happened to him. One would think he might freak out or run away.

Also, you haven't revealed the main character's name yet, but that can be fixed easily.

Good start so far. Very interesting and I now want to know what happens next.