Hi there!

Awesome story. I really like the ending. The length was great, not too short nor too long. Congrats on completing it! Hahaha. Looking forward to other stories from you. Take care! (:

aw, great ending. i'm glad they sorted everything out!! ~ Alenor

Great first chapter! I can't wait to read more!

YAY! Congrats on a great finish! I'm very happy I was able to read this story, and it was cute. Not over the top, and yet just the right amount of goofy, sad, angry, and bliss to turn it into a very good read.

Very appropriate, and I loved every second of it.

Aw, I so love his mom. Yeah, I've met some mothers who tend to dote and talk just a little too much. Sure, it's all sweet and innocent, yet it can also be VERY embarrassing.

I really liked it though. I can understand Chad's hurt, but I wish he could look past it and not always see Sunny as the bad guy. She was just stupid and naive, and couldn't see the truth in front of her. I just hope it's not too late.

Aw! It's so sad. I want to cry for her, and I hate those moments when you hit a road block, and can't to anything about it. It is so frustrating!!

I hope this cheers up soon :)

PS-- I loved the conversation between her and Jackson, it was spiteful, and yet you can't help but smile, hoping that the jerk gets exactly what's coming to him.

Aww, no, I want Prince Charming to come save her again! She definitely hasn't pushed him away for good!! Can't wait for more ~ Alenor

Yay! Another chapter. This one was really slow progressing and instead of taking a lot of action, it focused more on her feelings. Which is good, but it's definitely different to the other tones you've kept in this story.

I really hope she can sort things out with Chad. And Jackson, I hope he gets what he deserves. It wouldn't be right otherwise.

Update Soon!!

Hi! I stumbled upon this story and for that I'm glad! Haha. Awesome story. Keep on writing (:

NO! Okay, so the drama was good. But I always hate those parts in stories where the people who should be together get mad at one another and then walk away from each other. It frustrates me.

I understand it has to happen, but, but, but, ugh... it just bugs me. I want to go into the story and slap both of them just to show them that they're perfect for one another :(

Anyway, that's it.

Good chapter. Update soon!

oh, that's not good. can't wait for more though ~ Alenor

aww, jackson's an **, but chad's just trying to be nice and help her. he likes her, right? can't wait for more ~ Alenor

Aw. It's sad. But at least she learned that Jackson wasn't the guy for her. But he hurt her twice. Dude, that guy seriously needs his butt kicked. Although, I can say that and mean it in a sweet way.

You've created lovable characters. Even those that aren't so good really aren't so bad. I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing, but it gives your story a softer and more delicate tone. Making it an easy read.

I just hope her and Chad end up together :)

Aw, Chad is so cute!!

Yeah, he can be annoying at times, but he's genuinely sweet which is what I luv about him. I can't wait to read more :)

Really good. I like the way you put it "completely juvenile"

And the chapter title is really good for this one :)