I feel like I've read this same exact argument between these same exact characters a million times, and it's really getting on my nerves. It's just becoming repetitive, and I'm really sick of it. You right well, and I get that this is supposed to be building their relationship, but it's not. It's just repeating it over and over and over and over...

It's really annoying.

this is an awesome amazing wonderful terrific story i am in love with it! you are doing an awesome job on it. i cant wait for more!! i also read the previouse VS and was in love with it as well. the only problems i have found is sometimes you get sayings mixed up a bit which is fine no one is perfect. keep up the good work!

Wow. Night's dad sure is obsessive.

Hmm, I'm going to go for an engagement ring. Probably what we're meant to think, but I'm going to guess it anyway. Great chapter, hope the next one comes soon!

A wedding ring! And duh they're gone. He just sent them away. That ending made absolutely no sense to me, because he just sent them with his mother and sister. It seemed like you were trying to make it dramatic, but it just kind of seemed like a stupid way of ruining their moment.

OMG!Night was going to propose!...He was going to ask her to marry him,right?...but what's the deal with the missing twins and Lex?...'missing' ...reminds me of a long forgotten chain of events due to which Night, being his usual over-protective self, didn't want to let Chris go for a trip alone...or something similar to that...Am I anywhere near the real thing?...
Am dying to read the next chapter...do update soon.

ishani
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You're doing a great job :D I'm going to take a wild guess and say that Night was going to give Chris a ring :) Did I guess it right?

Violet is so sweet! I really liked this chapter - keep up the good work!

hey,really really sorry for reviewing so late.my net connction had gone berserk + viruses in my comp...plus exams...
anyway, i liked this chapte as well...and i think Night's personality is very...cant's find the right word...it's so different...intimidating,mesmerizing,rude,loving ...all mixed into one...by the way, is Violet Adam's daughter?...can humans be converted into elves?

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ishani
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Since this is my first time reviewing this story I would like to say that you have been doing a good job..This story has been my newest addiction for around one day nad half :B

About his chapter I would like to say that I think that Chris is Adam's child.. I mean she also had that kind of smell and their backgrounds kind of match with each other

Okay, the whole him calling her suicidal thing got really old really quickly. I mean, you kind of beat it to death. And Night is kind of starting to annoy me. And he seemed too cheerful in this chapter, and not serious enough. It seemed OOC.

I liked this chapter. It was funny. And I had forgotten about Chris being adopted. It would be...interesting if Chris was his child.

Whoa... If Chris is really Adam's daughter that would be weird

This chapter seemed a little convoluted. I mean, I could more or less figure out what was going on, but the way that you wrote it made it seem more confusing. Especially the thing with Violet.

Aww, poor Violet! She's really cute. I like the way you had her draw that stuff - my little sister used to draw like that when she was younger.