WOW. I'm very impressed little lady!

-the monosyllabic words of an inspiration-starved poet
-ruffled satin draped around your neck
-traded in your heart of gold for marble
-brows burrowed, bottom lip furled, spine curled to his easel
-It is cold, like your tea

These are just small amount of the lines that caught my eye. Very nice work.

Take care

~BatsandBows

P.S. When are you updating Gallagher And The Whale?!!