I like this. The rhyming scheme is brilliant, well done.

Your rhyme pattern sticks out the most. It was very clever and it gave such a definite rhythm to the piece. Wonderful :D

My favorite line is: "And your words have all been tailored to fit you." You sound very witty with that, and the imagery is fun and interesting.

Nice job,
-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

A whole story in a matter of four stanzas.
I enjoyed reading this.
I love how emotion can be portrayed in such a way.
Great stuff

cheers
estella