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| Reviews for The Plague |
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  Someone 5/13/13 . chapter 2 Again I think you're kind of rushing the story, sorry, but you asked for reviews and I'm reviewing this in all honesty. :/ You're a good writer you just need to calm down and stop rushing it ! x0x |
| Someone 5/13/13 . chapter 1 This is the first chapter only... Don't you think you need to at least wait until chapter 2 to start the zombie thing off? I know you're probably really excited to get this started but I think you need to take your time :P It was written well, only a few spelling/grammar mistakes. |
| reader 5/3/13 . chapter 4 this is very annoying learn to spell or stop writing no offence, ive seen 10 year olds write better than you |
| Lexi Snow 4/27/13 . chapter 2 Okay, so i read the 2nd chapter and im sorry to say i lost intrest. Suggestions for furture refrence? I suggest that you introduce the characters more... Smoothly instead of just throwing them in there. It seems kind of sloppy and not very well organized. There's a couple of grammar mistakes. Good things? I Like the fact that you explained the place well and jumped straight into the plot line. Other Comments. This may seem like a rude comment but it's not meant to be that way just an opinion. Don't take the comments to heart. If this made you sad im terribly sorry it wasn't my priority. - Journalist, Lexi Snow. |
| Lexi Snow 4/27/13 . chapter 1 It's pretty good so far but i haven't read anymore so imma readddd on :D |
| Guest 4/24/13 . chapter 5 Make more of these stories please and work on your grammar and spelling. :) |
| Guest 3/23/13 . chapter 5 When is the next update!? |
| Guest 3/15/13 . chapter 5 work on grammer |
| Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 3 im not even a big grammer person but i cant read this any more because of the grammer sorry but its redicules |
| Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 2 When you say undeads take the "s" off and take out all of the if your wonndering things the take your mind out of the story |
| Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 1 use spell check like where you say (is getting tear apart) should be getting torn apart and there were some others like that also the word hell is used to much. Other then that i really liked it. |
| william 3/7/13 . chapter 5 keep going a really cool and interesting story |
| Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 5 more! |
| Tiffany 1/4/13 . chapter 2 Hey its wonderful.. You just messed up with the spelling * :) add me on bbm :D pin:286D8EF1 |
| Dr.ShotGun 12/29/12 . chapter 5 Brillianti 10.9/10 But..the Fact you havn't released another for a Year and a Half is sad. D: |
