I love the steady repetition of the abrupt sentences in the first lines. It adds a nice touch to the poem, and I love how each first lines sets the theme for that stanza. A great poem, blossoming with hope.

This hits an emotional chord with me specifically. Well done. Tell me, did you read my mind?

interesting...My only suggestion is that it seems to go on about the same general line (he's dying, she's sad, he had told her he loved her). It's a bit too basic of an idea for this length of a poem, but well written all the same. I especially like the rhyme pattern.

let's hope, that you are right: Now in death they’d greet, their love more than a memory.
But anyhow it is a beautiful poeme

I liked the broken-down first lines and partial repetition; a very good, regular structure.

I have one word for you...
"wa!"
Okay, so it's notreally a word, but you get it..

That is SO. SAD.
...also, i want one.. but i don't want mine to die. I want him to live. Live and fight... and be sexy!
That is all. :)