Adorable. :) You just gotta love Kaye and Mael.

OMG i loved it so much!! It was so sweet! & just the right ammount of suspense and cuteness and i just loved it!

I so didn't realise this was a one-shot...

and then I got angry when i realised it was, hahah

but I loved it! :D Kaye and Mael sound like such cute people :)

good work :D

Cute story, the idea is interesting. I had a good time reading it and wanted to thank you for it. So thanks.

OMG THAT WAS GREAT :D
I don't normally like one-shots but this one was very satisfying :-D

nice~ I loved it!

This was adorable. Definitely faving it. Though I do feel sorry for Jade.

OMG ! that was awesome ! i haven't read anything for almost a month now because of my finals and then i read this ! it's perfect ! too bad for Jade though but i guess Mael was there first...

This was amazingly great.
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Keep writing. I would love to read more of your work.

Aw, that was really sweet...and hot :)

That was cute and awesome and I love it. Your characters are awesome, and I love Mael's name. You're an awesome writer. :)