Some single-spaces would look better, I think, for this. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.) Because the double-spaces spread out the words too much and look less clean. And maybe even couplets would look nice with this?

Your punctuation seemed off. And it was a little distracting from the words.

But your tone in the poem was very sweet; nice work,
-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)