I really like the concept of this poem, but I think you could've conveyed it a little better when actually writing it out. It started out fine, but as you keep reading, it starts to pull apart a little bit. The flow gets stopped up in a few spots, especially the lines with only one or two words on them. Otherwise, it's fairly good poem, just needs a little reworking.

-.kati

That is a really interesting point and concept about the black and white, and colour because the movie is in black and white, but the actors could techniqually see colour. If she could only see in black and white, that would be rather sad and life would be dull. (Sorry if I am taking this too literally... but it is making me think.)
I disliked a few lines because they didn't flow with the rest of the poem.
Overall, I did like it. Good job.
Areku

This is such a beautiful poem! =)