Wow! The ending was almost unexpected, but it fit so perfectly! Between the story of the puppet and the love from the knight the ending worked! I also liked how Mike and Savannah were so different, that she couldn’t see the poetic side to the story and that Mike knew she couldn’t see it. And then how the princess became an emotionless heap played well into the ending. Over all this was really nice! Great work!

Wow, that was really really intense... I was so unexpectedly sad after reading it.
I love the metaphors and analogies in there. Maybe a sequel to this one-shot? It was very well written, amazing language and grammar.
-AG :)