|Reviews for River of Blood|
| jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT 6/26/09 . chapter 1
that. is. good. i like...imagined it. -shudder-
| The Chaos Sorcerer 6/9/09 . chapter 1
Wow, i love this one. A lot of feeling and power in those words. And nicely constructed...i could almost see it.
| fallenflame13 6/1/09 . chapter 1
Dark, but I really liked this. I found it interesting how you refered to death as home. Good work.
| Isca 5/25/09 . chapter 1
Wow. This poem flows really well-it's smooth, yet chilling. The tone of the line, "She smiles," is particularly amazing-suggesting that the pain and approach of death brings joy to the speaker; she finds peace and a release. It's rather sad, though, that the world became so cruel and painful that there was no joy left to comfort the speaker.
| WinMyHeart5444 5/24/09 . chapter 1
Wow, this was so good. It was graphic, but not in a bad way, because I didn't finish the poem feeling bad for the girl. I felt happy that she was where she wanted to be.
My favorite part: "A pool of cerise liquid: Growing deeper by the minute" It was so vivid. Hehe. Keep it up! :)