I never got round to reading this on deviantart, but I don't know why. I love vampire stories.
And this is no exception :)
It's original, considering it's a vampire story - most people can't pull that off.
Great work!

This story is hard to put down. I hope you get another chapter out soon.
Your sentences are really short and blood in this story, and make it seems fast paced. I think, you could stop now and then to 'smell the roses.' (Don't we love figurative sentences?) And in the first chapter, I think you could try and incorporate some hints of what may happen later into it. Not too much, I mean, just to show where this story may end up in future. Is it just a memoire of her life? But if she's immortal, does that mean she's expecting to be killed soon? Why does she have a desire to make her story immortal?
And, what's glamour? . . .
However, it seems interesting, for lack of a better word, and I can't wait for another chapter.