An interesting blend of companionship and loneliness. What I mean is that there's this sense of togetherness and companionship in the first 2.5 lines, followed by this deeper sort of solidarity. Can you understand what I'm trying to say here?

Anyway, I loved it. I've missed these joria, following the progression of 4x4 poetry. It is a stable, yet uncertain form, one which I greatly enjoy.

I hope all is well with you.

Felicia.

"Drunk on dark sublime" Loved that line, it was fabulous, if I'm being honest.

Sublime makes me think of whimiscla happiness, and pariting it the the dark before really created a powerful dynamic. And then in the early part of that stanza you intoruce the feeling of being inebriated on it. It's very well done, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

"Nothing but silence in our contours." There's such a sweeping grace about this line--it just washes over the reader with ease. I also liked that you put a twist on the word 'sublime' by making it 'dark.' Lovely piece. :)