wow.

I absolutely love this.

I read on your profile that you're 14, wow do you have writing talent! Keep it up!

I feel that you did very well with this poem.

It 'speaks'. :)

"You were my the flower season" I think you meant something else.

Your alliteration in this is wonderful! Very poetic sounding and beautifully used, with lots of imagery. :)

And your wording was impressive. Particularly toward the end, where the words had a good rhythm and sounded very original.

Good job!

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

Wow. This is absolutely amazing :) I hope you don't mind, but I'm adding it to my favorites so I can remember it so I can show my friends later. Awesome! I loved it so so much!