Ha. This was cute. I like the progression between the beginning and the end, as you slowly reveal more and more things. It was interesting to read and very sweet as you near the ending.

I understand why it's in list form, but I really think it'd be better in paragraphs. Even short paragraphs, but I felt like everything was just too spread out.

Thank you for posting!
-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

This makes me want to write a list of all the things about my crush, and see what comes out at the end.

even though it's sweet, I can see a bit of meaning in it. I like your "stories" like this. and the one I just reviewed. They're a nice break from the long stories other people write. I haven't read your story story one shots, I don't want to be let down - although I'm sure I wouldn't. I just think these little ones are sensational.

Well done!! (sorry I wrote so much about so little!)