Haha! That's such a cute conversation!

Wow. This was impressively weird. But the idea /was/ original and I had fun reading it. So props for the originality of the story.

Your dialogue was very lively! It was fast-paced and smooth and interesting. Good use of dialogue!

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

that was hysterical. i love the last line

haha, that's adorable. Love the ending!! It's a stupid conversation (no offense) but at least it leads to something. It's adorable :)

This was briliant. Very clever.

Enough to make you find it brilliant, but not so much you're thinking dang why did you haev to tell me that much.

If only real life love was that easy ;D

haha i love it :P

that's actually cute.
it is definitely weird. but it sounds like something me and my boyfriend would talk about.

haha, that just brighted my day.