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BLAKKSTONE 2009-08-23 . chapter 6
A little detective work. A little B & E, an illegal mike, an illegal search.

Definitely a rogue cop.

MS-13.

Getting closer and closer to sniffing out Bernan.

Things are about to get heavy.
BLAKKSTONE 2009-08-19 . chapter 5
Snypa really is hardcore. He reminds me of Denzel Washington in TRAINING DAY (with more of an ethical core).

And now, Bernan...Bad news ahead...
BLAKKSTONE 2009-08-16 . chapter 4
More kick-ass brawling and characterization for the man who would be Snypa.

Keep it coming...
BLAKKSTONE 2009-07-18 . chapter 3
Okay, an update! Cool.

So, we have a different kind of THREAT looming for Spade. White supremacists.

Nice brawls. Nice and brutal.

Spade sure is angry, that is even before turning vigilante. Like a DIRTY HARRY.

Keep it coming.
BLAKKSTONE 2009-06-13 . chapter 2
Excellent action. Different from what you've done before, more grounded in reality (not knocking what you did before, just comparing).

Bad ass. Will keep reading.
BLAKKSTONE 2009-05-30 . chapter 1
Hey, Tears,

Ok, you have my attention. You have a sort of SNYPA BEGINS thing going on here.

Is this a reboot? I thought SNYPA already had a background story?

I am intrigued, will keep reading.
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