This is simply beautiful. It actually gave me chills when I read it.. though that might be from the AC suddenly blowing on me... Idk. But yeah this is beautiful the connection between the people is so strong and yet... almost broken at the same time. I LOVE IT!

You portrayed the connection between these two very well. You could tell that it was organic, yet also something that these two have to work at. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.