Another great price of writing from you! Man, this one was very well written, too! I loved the theme of the masks, and the ending was really good ( in a kind of morbid way, lol)! I only have 1 question, did the 2 pol who fled end up dying, too? Loved it anyway!

Awesome. Simply beautiful. You ent out the message flawlessly

I think the idea of this is tremendously clever. :D I love the fact you're telling a story (very well) throughout the poem. This was very entertaining to read.

I really hope you put this into single-spaced stanzas. It would be so much better that way. This is too long to leave a block stanza and single-spaced stanzas would make the poem read smoother. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.)

Wonderful poem!

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

Really interesting piece, I loved the fantastical elements of it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.