That was.. wow. That gave me the shivers. I hate spiders with a passion and this story certainly brought back old fears.

Amazing story! I'm sorry to hear that you have writer's block, and I certainly hope that you will update this story soon. I love reading about twisted fairytales and or nursery rhymes.

Good luck with your writing!

Wow... WOW! Talk about taking kindergarden to the next level! I think... this is so beautiful it makes me queasy. I love your writing! You should get published!!

BRILLIANT. I always had a thing for twisting up children's stories and nursery rhymes. I'm looking forward for the next story.
~Grey

Awesome story!! Keep on writing!!

so disturbing...that was great! I liked the idea of the spider being a person ^_^ freaky...

Wow, well writen and creepy! But I like it, that was a creative way of turning things around! Hey I have a story suggestion, how about the wheels on the bus go round and round? Then some weird freakish accident could happen! Update soon!