|Reviews for Early Bird|
| tonight we bloom 9/7/09 . chapter 1
Aww this is so sweet. It kind of reminds me of my poem "Watercolor in Gray" which is in my collection of poems.
One thing I don't understand though, in the last line. The word "appears" at the end doesn't quite make sense... did you mean to say "Where I dream until the time you return beside me?"
| Isca 8/16/09 . chapter 1
"Return to the solitude of night." I love this line. I'm a nocturnal person myself, if only for the reason that there is something incredibly calming about the darkness, silence, and shadows - it's comforting, in a sorrowful kind of way, and it helps the 'dreamer' in me come alive. :)
| NotLikeEveryoneElse 7/30/09 . chapter 1
Wow I really liked that... graet work.
| the-ever-changing-name 7/6/09 . chapter 1
cough cough AWESOME cough
| Faithless Juliet 5/25/09 . chapter 1
I really liked all the discriptive images you showcased, and the dialogue used was natural. Keep up the good work.