|Reviews for Sprinkler|
| simpleplan13 7/26/09 . chapter 1
I like this. It's much more straightforward than a lot of your pieces, but still it makes a great comparison and uses really nice personification.
| Ygg 7/10/09 . chapter 1
Quite original imagery you use! I love the summer feeling it gives me :-) Good work!
| tonight we bloom 7/5/09 . chapter 1
You took the idea of a "sprinkler" and created a heartwarming, beautiful poem.
I applaud you.
| Not-Without-Mustard 6/4/09 . chapter 1
Too adorable! Very heartwarming, in an innocent way. I love the imagery in the word "freckles" (as I see nearly every other reviewer has...lol!).
| The-Golden-Hour 5/30/09 . chapter 1
cute poem :L...i think its really nice :)
| Dale Christopher 5/27/09 . chapter 1
I love how playful and innocent this is. The use of the word freckles is amazing a kind of adorable.
| Isca 5/26/09 . chapter 1
Your use of 'freckle' imagery is wonderful.
| NewRevolution 5/26/09 . chapter 1
ah, i loved it! Especially 'the warm face of summer'. Just lovely. Well done.
| LittleLoser.AndRoloLamperouge 5/25/09 . chapter 1
wow, you got to use sprinkler in a very distinct way...