I like this. It's much more straightforward than a lot of your pieces, but still it makes a great comparison and uses really nice personification.

Quite original imagery you use! I love the summer feeling it gives me :-) Good work!

You took the idea of a "sprinkler" and created a heartwarming, beautiful poem.

I applaud you.

Too adorable! Very heartwarming, in an innocent way. I love the imagery in the word "freckles" (as I see nearly every other reviewer has...lol!).

cute poem :L...i think its really nice :)

I love how playful and innocent this is. The use of the word freckles is amazing a kind of adorable.

Peace, Daze

Your use of 'freckle' imagery is wonderful.

ah, i loved it! Especially 'the warm face of summer'. Just lovely. Well done.

wow, you got to use sprinkler in a very distinct way...

-LittleLoser-