Absolutely perfect.

you're right, it is very cheesy but i didnt notice untill you pointed it out. i was 2 busy finding it adorable and funny.

cute and funny ending!

i'm a pretty cheesy person myself.. i just loved the line "she felt sixteen all over again" :D

Aww James seems like such a cutie! ]

But yeah seriously why would people willingly get a blood test? The last time I had a blood test my hand went purple and it was kinda freaky.

That was ridiculous and sweet. Loved it. :)

Hahaha, that was so cheesy. I loved it. It was like...Fred Astaire-cheesy. Which I like, so yeah. Very cute. :)

Haha I do think this is cheesy and a bit unbelievable, but it's incredibly cute and sweet, haha. If only all boys were like James. XD I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

Yes, I do agree it's cheesy but its too cute honestly! :D And I have an abnormally (to me anyways when compared to my classmates-we took a blood pressure test at school for one of our practicals LOL) low blood pressure.. -.-" I keep wondering why it is so till now.. HAHAHA. Anyways, if only this would happen in real life! :D

cute

Well that was just brilliant.

I heart this story! D

HC

xx

Aww that was just so sweet. I really loved it.

I went LOL after I finished reading this. LMAO

GREATT...Xx

Well i liked it!

It was cute! :)

Yes, it was cheese-tastic, but very cute in the end. I just love the part where she asks why and he just says 'You're amazing, you're shiny!' That really cracked me up.

(And I know what you mean about the blood test thing. Out of the hundreds of veins in your arms, you'd think they'd be able to find just one!)