This story is beautifully written! It gave me chills! Your sensory details and imagery are brilliant and your characters were dynamic in such a short piece. I loved this! It makes me green with envy!

-Kayla

P.S. Because I'm desperate for readers, you should consider reading some of my works, specifically Call Me Crazy. Sorry for the begging, but your advice seems like something that could improve my writing. Thanks.

This story was really good. I enjoyed reading it.
I'm glad you won the top 5 entries; I too entered the contest but didn't make it that far. Reading your story has encouraged me.
Good Luck with the rest of your work and keep on writting. I would love to hear more.