this story is a gas.

you're a kook! love it.

Interesting. Not really sure how to read it, but then, I'm probably missing something obvious. I have a tendency to do that. I love the lines, "and here, it rises; and here, it falls." It's just very musical and poetic. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

This poem is very innovative. Your allusions to historical places only adds to the grand nature of the 'sweeping music.' :)

this is interesting...