Ok so I can't read something and not review it. It's a disease. Let's call it Obsessive Reviewing Disorder- ORD

Harsh, intense and emotional. Loved the second stanza as well as the internal torment the poem conveys.

very harsh, very real.

i love it. it sums up desperation and self-deprecation, at its worst and best.

hm touching poem what's causing the charecther's depression?