|Reviews for Are You There, God?|
| The Chaos Sorcerer 6/9/09 . chapter 1
This was good. If i may apply some constructive critisism: if you extended the paragraphs describing the persons life, using a bit more emphasis and less common-place words like Shit, then the writing would give off a more serious and emotional meaning. After all, the person is about to commit suicide.
Other than that, a great piece.
| Connie Loudermilk 6/4/09 . chapter 1
dark, I've been i the dark a time or two myself.
| with eyes looking up 6/1/09 . chapter 1
i like it.
| Isca 5/30/09 . chapter 1
That's one of the hardest things about believing in a god and having faith-the fact that such a being would let 'bad things happen to good people.' The 'click' at the end was very hard-hitting. Good work. :)