This was good. If i may apply some constructive critisism: if you extended the paragraphs describing the persons life, using a bit more emphasis and less common-place words like Shit, then the writing would give off a more serious and emotional meaning. After all, the person is about to commit suicide.

Other than that, a great piece.

dark, I've been i the dark a time or two myself.

oh my.

i like it.

very...real.

:)

That's one of the hardest things about believing in a god and having faith-the fact that such a being would let 'bad things happen to good people.' The 'click' at the end was very hard-hitting. Good work. :)