She is everything and more- the solemn hypnotic... I have had this experience, and it is not pleasant. Perfect capture of it. Go you: props, kudos, et cetera.

powerful piece. i hope you're doing all right (: great job!
Faith

The repetition of some of the lines really made it clear that the speaker is trying to convince themselves that this person, this love they feel, isn't just a figment of their imagination. :)

I love the abstract melodrama of this - it's very powerful, don't get me wrong, but the emotion is succulent.

I have to say that I don't particularly like that you made parts of it bold - it's an artistic choice, I know - it just didin't do it for me. I feel like your meaning would still get across to the reader without that. Either way, I really enjoyed this piece, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.