I really like this poem, interesting point, has a really nice flow to it, easy to read, really nice work in my opinion.

personally, i think you're message gets lost in the poem. I'm not sure if you're saying that there is not a God or if people shouldn't say God will punish you if you do what ever it is that you do. I read it 3x so you may want to work on the message. But, the good news is that you have a great sense of incorperating rhyme into your poem. I mainly stick with free verse. You have a wonderful sense of rhyme. lucky you