it was definitely very original. i've certainly never read anything even a little bit like it... :) very interestuing read indeedie :)

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In the middle scene, the flash back, Marcus' name changes to Martin and back again.

For some reason I haven't read this story yet even though I've read your others multiple times. I'm glad I fixed this.

I read this the first time and loved it.

I read it a second time with a very fake french accent and I loved it more. :D

Second story I've read of yours. Second story I've loved. I love Rebish. He's a strong character and they're always the best. And I love how he was the more dominant lover even though he's bottom. Lots of people seem to doubt this happening which is frankly a load of bullshit...sorry for swearing and everything. Loved the story. Off to read some more of your stuff.

I love the note you end it on. The story is, at heart, about a promise and about love, not just random sexings, and you don't lose sight of that.

You know, I don't think I ever asked...where'd you come up with the name Rebish?

Health problems? Oh no! Poor Xanthie. :( Get well soon. Super soon!

Interesting story! :) I loved how Marcus confessed his love and how Rebish decided to try and love him. The plan for surviving the firing squad was great XD

Good ending and ... the "plan" to escape the firing range wasn't what I expected at all. I had visions of him asking to be nude and ... yeah, that's about as far as I got because it doesn't make sense or trying to jump at the last second and hope that the bullets hit his crotch and somehow he'd survive that way - hey, I didn't say any of these wondering made any sense. Good story, though.

I haven't read this one before so it's all new to me. You do an awesome job of setting the scene with sparse details and I love all of the dialect - that's difficult to do - or it is for me at least. It's also very suspensefull because I'm imagining all of these scenarios that could help him escape a firing squad ... and I've got nothing so I'm excited to see what it could be.

It's good to read something of yours again. :)