A great story but i thought the nameless guy was fought connected more?

wow

i really liked how you portrayed a person who has no memory of who they were

it just...fits

it's really sad how she didn't recognize any of the people in her past though

i would be so sad if that happened to one of my best friends

i love jordan and audrey(:

it feels so...right for them to be together

great story!

It was slightly confusing for me near the end, but I loved it! Was Jordan ever really connected to Audrey's mom? If he was I must have missed it. Well I had a great time reading this and it's going on my favorites list. And also, really? Only five reviews? This was spectacular and I really expected that it would have at least 30!

I thik this should definitely be more popular (funny how fics work like that huh?) because it is really original and I liked it a lot. I am so pumped for you to beta my story! YAY!

aw, Jordan. :)

so cute.

her mom... is i don't know what she is. :P

but i like Jordan.

-toffeecakesxox.

I really like this story... its refreshing to read the pov of someone who has no 'filter' in front of their eyes... You did a great job!

Grtz Silencia

M, very nice. And different. I like it. The tone is awesome. Jordan is so mysterious, it just makes the story even better... And the weird grudge Audrey's mom has against him... kinda cool, actually, to leave it open-ended. Yay.

Aw... that was cute! . I liked the way Audrey expresses herself. And Jordan's sweetness! :D