You're a really great writter. It was a sweet story and is very, very well written. Also, you put in just the right amount of detail so you can understand what's happening but it never gets boaring. Amazingly done!

wow! that was really good! i love it!

Hey, this is actually pretty good! You should make this into an actual story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Great job, chickiboo.

Love yah

cool story, u should make a sequel (p.s. I read ur profile and u do look pretty)

Wow. This is really well-written. And REALISTIC.

Hence, you get Cassa-points. 8D