Beautiful!
I love this ode to the moon! :)

Again italics and double dots. Also, confused because the second line to me implied the person is not a woman, but the third implies that she is.

I did like that second line though. It was a funny comparison. reminds me of the Katy Perry song.

"you are just a mere reflection of the sunshine yet is it just your charm that seem to make you appear majestic and full of splendour?"... I don't like the repetition of just. I also think this line is a tad too long with the flow and it should be "your charm that seems"

I do like the ending. It's sweet, but realistic. The piece is great. Your descriptions are nice.

Wow that was beautifully written.

"Stars tend to fall around you." I love how gravitational this person sounds.

"Your idiosyncrasies still intrigue me." I think it's wonderful that people can learn to appreciate the flaws of others. The things that make us imperfect are quite fascinating.

:)