Aww. Damn- I got tears on the edges of my eyes!
*sulks for a few seconds, and then comes around*
That was good. Really, really, good. Simple, but in a pure, perfect kind of way.
The first and last stanzas I think were flawless. And well, actually all of it except the first two lines in the second stanza. There's nothing wrong with them exactly, I just don't think they flow /as well/. But it's still a great poem.