I'm in awe for your great talent!

i have to admit, I've had to re-read this thrice because my slow mind just couldn't quite grasp the pure amazing-ness of this.

really well done. i can picture and feel for the character.

another great poem.

"A part of me just waiting for a vessel." I think it's interesting that you chose the words 'a part of me.' Some people belive that a baby is born because a soul was looking for a home. But, the speaker suggests that there is a part of her soul that wants to be freed-how fascinating. :)