Perfect rhyming. Quite an emotional and sad piece. Excellent work overall as usual. :) I hope you post more poems soon, I think I've read/reviewed most of the poems you've got up at the moment. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

This is a great poem! I loved it. It was so well written.
I loved the line: "Having run so fast to hide, before daylight caused night’s death."
You did a good job of describing with your imagery.
Good job! ;)
ps. Thanks for your review!

That boy needs to toughen up! Just kidding. It's a good story. You really got the feel of the boy well. Two thumbs up.

I LOVE THIS!! You probably knew I would, yes?! :) The poor little guy, I needs to give him a hug.

I love your narratives and absolutely admire your ability to rhyme without forcing it and compromising your word choice =) This poem has a comfortable pace and consistent beat, it's a very enjoyable read =)

You do realise that I am taking that child home to nurture and love.
Crying. Again.
Biggest "Aww" Ever.

Very nice work. I like how you were original. Im getting a little tired of over dramatic love/emo poems. You did an awesome job. This is the best poem Ive read in quite awhile. Your a great writer. ^ ^ Keep writing!