Aww, this was such a cute chapter. :)
They're boyfriend-girlfriend now! Took them long enough, haha. I'm glad that they're finally together though.
It feels like the last line "Life was great" foreshadows the rest of the story because nothing lasts forever in the fiction world. There's always drama. Whenever anyone says that things are perfect and everyone's happy, something's sure to strike, and I want to know what's going to happen, so update soon please!
Great chapter.

i really like it :)

you missed some name switcehes, one james and i think three elizabeths
some at the end of this chapter

Yay, new chapter!
A lot of interesting developments in this one. It would be nice to see more of what's happening (the details), but the dialogue was good. Cute scene at the end. :)
I hope you update soon!

I love the story, but im getting confused with all the name changing!

You have a good grasp of dialogue, but I feel like your scenes are very dialogue-heavy. It's good to have a lot of talking because it shows more than it tells and the reader learns more about the character's personality and such, but a little more description in between would be nice. :)

The aura thing's getting more and more interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses! Good chapter. :)

Ah, you told me that the other story I reviewed was worse than this one. I wouldn't say that's necessarily true because every story is special, but I can definitely see that your writing style matured. A little more show and less tell would be nice. And grammar. Grammar is very, very important. And wow, last line :) Nice!
I hope you update soon!

Your story line is interesting from what I've read so far. :)
Two things:
- I wish you didn't do the whole listing thing in the prologue/introduction. Everyone does that, and I think you can do better! We don't need to know the physical description immediately. Blend it into the story. Don't just tell us about the relationships. Bring them into the plot. Lily plays the flute and sings? Show that, don't just say it. If it's important, it'll show up sooner or later.
- Punctuation on dialogue. There's two websites on my profile that I think can help you out a lot.
Other than those two things, I'm liking this story. Your characters are fun, your dialogue is natural, and your plot is moving along nicely! :)

Interesting plotline...I'd like to see some one-on-one interaction between Cole and Mel. But just wondering, is Mel a supernatural being or simply a human with an extraordinary gift? Is everyone else human?

Make sure you check on your punctuation; you're missing commas here and there.

Raww!! Why why why is the main character's name Elizebeth again!! You are seriously messing with my brain!! (just kidding)
Phew, what a long chapter! Okay, I must say I'm intruged by James.
Good work!
This looks very promising!