The form and tone of this poem immediately draws the reader in and sparks their interest. The line, "We can't read the signs here, and yet I feel connected," was absolutely mind-blowing and profound-perhaps, indeed, we are all spiritually connected. Excellent work. :)

Bravo! Poetry i cant understand...

Either a good thing or a bad thing, it all depends.

I like your use of imagery though, and the 'we are runaways' bit. That was nice.

Thanks for the... interesting... read. Truly.

I won't pretend to understand it. But I think I may have experienced the bit about long after the food and drinks and good TV are gone and inspiration has a field day.