loved this. Hope Zane, Tobi and Jake live hapily ever after! A sequel would be nice! : )

This story is sooo good, oh my god, your writing style is awesome and flows so smoothly. I love the characters, and the memories of Zane. Poor Tobi, I hope they meet again, its so sad, though the memories are so sweet.

Poor Tobias, sniffles. Great job though!

Aw such a sweet meeting, lol. Leo seems awesome! haha the characters are very amusing. Excellent job!

I don't think the beginning is rough-it's a tear-jerker and I love those! Poor Tobi and Zane. Zane seems like a cool character and poor Tobi, so attached...sniffles. Excellent job! I love it!

OH this is soo god!

You have talent! An interesting plot and strong characters mixed with smooth and good writing style. I really enjoyed it. I do hope to see either a sequel or spinoff or even some totally different story from you very soon.

OH I like it!

Well written. I like the characters, but I think you can give them (side char especially) more personality, to be honest.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

no offense but the secret meetings did sound like harry potter! *huggles* don't get mad,please?:(

aw and so sad when he tried to lie to his headmistress. :( *hugglesTobias*

aw that was so sweet and sad at the same time :(

I think you write romance very well! it made me stay all the way up to 3 over here!XD i can't wait for the next chapter!

if there is one kind of magic i would want it would be able to whisper like that in the wind. but seeing as i can make anything grow, i would probably belong to earth. *hugglesTobi* i feel you man.

_at least this memory is comforting. poor Tobias. i guess he couldn't move or something. haven't reached the other chapters yet. but i hope he doesn't hurt himself anymore:(

That was heartbreaking :( though i have a question, why can't he just graduate or move to another school to see him?