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kelloggs256 2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Oh those wonderful moments when technology decides to have mood swings of its own. What a price it must pay.
Ygg 2009-07-10 . chapter 1
Lol.. *shares a smile of recognition* :-)
Nice one.
Princess-anna57 2009-06-26 . chapter 1
LOL I cannot believe the number of poems and haikus I've read about this menace 403 forbidden. It's hilarious! And I most certainly like your take on it :D Keep writing!

~Anna~
boys kiss girls 2009-06-05 . chapter 1
This is great. I felt like this last night except if the keyboard were to go flying, so would the rest of the computer. I love the humoristic frustration in this. :)
Katie Nicole 2009-06-02 . chapter 1
HAHAHA! Oh my word.
I have you on author alert, so when I saw this title in my inbox, I was confused - I literally thought Fictionpress's incessant 403 had somehow followed your alert into my inbox.

How wonderful.
By the way, if you've not yet figured out how to beat it, just press F5 everytime it 403's [:

Isca 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
LOL. Poor, innocent keyboard. It's so frustrating when you have to click the 'Refresh' button six times before the page will work. What happened to the Admins of this site? Did they fall into a hole?
FaithMemory 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
LOL awesome! XDD you should make one that tells about 'Refreshing a page' LOL
LittleLoser.OfTheRebellion 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
that forbidden text really ** me off...


-LittleLoser-
Daiysis 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
lol, this got me laughing-- thanks =)
Aerwiya 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Ha! I love this. I totally get the 403 error so often it's ridiculous.
Faithless Juliet 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Such a lovely ode, to error messages everywhere!

I have that 403 nonsense, I'm constantly clicking refresh whenever I log on to fp.

You really show the solid picture of frustration, and the lines: "fist flenched, teeth grinding" are very strong and evocative. Then you close it with "keyboard goes flying" which really make me laugh out loud.

Your summary was hillarious as well. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
DD 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Lol, true. xD
Jenniii Wren 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
exactally!
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